Sneak Peek of Admin’s dream

Here’s a sneak peek of the book I want to publish. I’m in the editing phase so any constructive criticism is appreciated. My characters are based off people in my life so to my friends and family you may see some resemblance between people and my characters. Just thought I’d forewarn you. I’m thinking of calling it Stormborn but if anyone has any suggestions for a title I welcome them. Give me your honest opinion please.

sneak peek